GENETIC JOYCE STUDIES - Issue 8 (Spring 2008)

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The following tables present the placards and page proofs that contribute to each of the eighteen episodes of Ulysses. Individual documents––or more precisely the portions of individual documents that pertain to any one episode––are grouped together under their designated level number in Hans Walter Gabler’s Ulysses: A Critical and Synoptic Edition. Within each level grouping, documents are ordered according to line number. Gabler’s CSE levels do not divide easily into placard or page proof groups––colour bands help to distinguish the material constituents of any given level. Placards appear in blue, page proofs in red. To distinguish subsequent levels, progressively bolder colours are used. Further details on any particular document, such as the location of duplicates (if any), the full text range it covers and full Archive pagination, can be accessed by clicking on the “Marked Copy” to switch to material listings.

The dates between June 1921 and January 1992 during which a particular document was active are denoted in the “Active Months” column. This range indicates not only the time that Joyce spent correcting or adding to a proof but also covers the physical document’s life at the Dijon print works––from (in some cases) the date of its first pull from composed type to the date when, after Joyce had returned a marked copy, any additions were set. In determining this interval, and ensuring that it is as narrowly defined as possible, the Imprimeries on the physical documents (reproduced in the James Joyce Archive) and Darantiere’s letters to Beach, which are now at Buffalo, were consulted. On the other hand, in cases where the active months have been inferred from adjacent proof documents, the entry appears in square parentheses. Towards the end of the proofing job, Darantiere stopped declaring the identities of the received proofs in his letters to Beach; this is reflected in the paucity of terminal dates for the constituent dossiers of the final episodes. For these documents, however, the approximate end date for their usefulness to Joyce or the printers can be deduced from the subsequent settings.

Individual documents are denoted by ‘Pl’ in the case of placards and ‘PP’ in the case of page proofs––followed by their Darantiere numeration / alphabetization and the setting number. To distinguish placards from page proofs, coloured bands (blue and red, respectively) have been used. In addition, the setting number is indicated for the placards with a lower case Roman numeral, the page proofs with an Arabic numeral.

Episode list

“Telemachus” (1) “Nestor” (2) “Proteus” (3) “Calypso” (4) “Lotus Eaters” (5) “Hades” (6)

“Aeolus” (7) “Lestrygonians” (8) “Scylla and Charybdis” (9) “Wandering Rocks” (10) “Sirens” (11) “Cyclops” (12) “Nausicaa” (13)

“Oxen of the Sun” (14) “Circe” (15) “Eumaeus” (16) “Ithaca” (17) “Penelope” (18)

“Telemachus” (1) [top]

CSE Level	Text 1986; 1922	Setting / Gathering	Active Months	Marked Copy	JJA
1	1.0001–0292 1.0293–0592 1.0593–0744	Pl 1.i Pl 2.i Pl 3.i	11–23 June [June] – 23 June [June] – 28 June	Harvard Harvard Harvard	17.002–010 17.013–020 17.023–027
2	1.0001–0516; [003].01–017.04 1.0516–0744; 017.04–23.16	PP 1.1 PP 2.1	27 June – 2 August 29 June – 2 August	Buffalo Buffalo	22.005–018 22.066–073
3	1.0001–0512; [003].01–016.37 (1) 1.0001–0512; [003].01–016.37 1.0513–0744; 017.01–23.16	PP 1.2.a PP 1.2.b PP 2.2	8 August – [Aug] 8 August – [Aug] 8 August – [Aug]	Buffalo Buffalo Buffalo	22.021–034 22.035–048 22.083–089
4	1.0001–0219 (2) 1.0220–0512 1.0513–0744	Pl I.i Pl II.i Pl III.i	18 Aug – 2 September [Aug] – 2 September [Aug] – 2 September	Harvard Harvard Harvard	17.096–104 17.107–114 17.117–123
5	1.0001–0512; [003].01–016.37 1.0513–0744; 017.01–023.16	PP 1.3 PP 2.3	5–20 September 5– 20 September	Texas Texas	22.051–064 22.099–105

1. The printer did not make the single revision Joyce indicated on this copy of the setting and so Joyce repeats it on PP 1.3 (compare JJA 22.34 and 22.64).

2. Placards I–III are paginated. See the introduction to the placards-finder.

“Nestor” (2) [top]

CSE Level	Text 1986; 1922	Setting / Gathering	Active Months	Marked Copy	JJA
1	2.0001–0146 2.0146–0449	Pl 3.i Pl 4.i	[June] – 28 June [June] – 28 June	Harvard Harvard	17.027–030 17.033–040
2	2.0001–0211; [024].01–030.01 2.0212–0449; 030.02–036.20	PP 2.1 PP 3.1	29 June – 2 August [June] – 2 August	Buffalo Buffalo	22.077–082 22.117–123
3	2.0001–0211; [024].01–030.01 2.0212–0449; 030.02–036.20	PP 2.2 PP 3.2	8 August – [Aug] 8 August – [Aug]	Buffalo Buffalo	22.093–098 22.133–139
4	2.0001–0028 (1) 2.0028–0323 2.0324–0449	Pl III.i Pl IV.i Pl V.i	[Aug] – 2 September [Aug] – 2 September [Aug] – 2 September	Harvard Harvard Harvard	17.124 17.127–134 17.137–140
5	2.0001–0323; [024].01–032.37 2.0324–0449; 033.01–036.20	PP 2.3 PP 3.3	5–20 September 5–20 September	Texas Texas	22.106–114 22.149–152

1. Placards III–V are paginated. See the introduction to the placards-finder.

“Proteus” (3) [top]

CSE Level	Text 1986; 1922	Setting / Gathering	Active Months	Marked Copy	JJA
1	3.0001–0304 3.0304–0505	Pl 5.i Pl 6.i	14–18 June [June] – 18 June	Harvard Harvard	17.043–052 17.055–060
2	3.0001–0375; [037].01–047.06 3.0375–0505; 047.06–050.23	PP 3.1 PP 4.1	[June] – 2 August [June] – 2 August	Buffalo Buffalo	22.123–132 22.167–170
3	3.0001–0360; [037].01–046.28 3.0360–0505; 046.29–050.23 3.0360–0505; 046.29–050.23 (1)	PP 3.2 PP 4.2.a PP 4.2.b	8 August – [Aug] 8 August – [Aug] 8 August – [Aug]	Buffalo Buffalo Buffalo	22.139–148 22.183–186 22.199–202
4	3.0001–0131 (2) 3.0131–0434 3.0435–0505 (3)	Pl V.i Pl VI.i Pl VII.i	[Aug] – 2 September [Aug] – 2 September [Aug] – 2 September	Harvard Harvard Harvard	17.141–144 17.147–154 17.157–158
5	3.0001–0444; [037].01–048.37 3.0445–0505; 049.01–050.23	PP 3.3 PP 4.3	5–20 September 5–21 September	Texas Texas	22.153–164 22.215–216

1. “Placard VII” is written in the hand of a printer on the top of p. 51 (JJA 22.201). The instruction refers to the switch back to placards from page proofs. See the introduction to the placards-finder.

2. Placards V–VII are paginated.

3. Placard VII is a reset of PP 4.2.b.

“Calypso” (4) [top]

CSE Level	Text 1986; 1922	Setting / Gathering	Active Months	Marked Copy	JJA
1	4.0001–0076 4.0077–0396 4.0397–0551	Pl 6.i Pl 7.i Pl 8.i	[June] – 18 June 16–23 June [June] – 23 June	Harvard Harvard Harvard	17.061–062 17.064–072 17.075–078
2	4.0001–0394; [053].01–063.24 4.0394–0551; 063.25–067.35	PP 4.1 PP 5.1	[June] – 2 August 30 June – 2 August	Buffalo Buffalo	22.173–182 22.232–236
3	4.0001–0370; [053].01–062.37 4.0001–0370; [053].01–062.37 (1) 4.0370–0551; 063.01–067.35 (2)	PP 4.2.a PP 4.2.b PP 5.2	8 August – [Aug] 8 August – [Aug] 8 August – [Aug]	Buffalo Buffalo Buffalo	22.189–198 22.205–214 22.249–253
4	4.0001–0142 (3) 4.0143–0441 4.0442–0551	Pl VII.i Pl VIII.i Pl IX.i	[Aug] – 2 September [Aug] – 2 September [Aug] – 2 September	Harvard Harvard Harvard	17.161–164 17.167–174 17.177–179
5	4.0001–0441; [053].01–064.35 4.0442–0551; 065.01–067.35 (4)	PP 4.3 PP 5.3	5–21 September 5–20 September	Texas Texas	22.219–230 22.265–267
6	4.0442–0551; 065.01–067.35 (5)	PP 5.4	[Sept] – 21 September	Texas	22.281–285

1. “Placard VII” is written in the hand of a printer on the top of p. 51 (JJA 22.201). The instruction refers to the switch back to placards from page proofs. See the introduction to the placards-finder.

2. “Placard IX” is written in the hand of a printer on the top of p. 67 (JJA 22.251).

3. Placards VII–IX are paginated. Placard VII is a reset of PP 4.2.b.

4. The page breaks of the following setting are marked by hand on PP 5.3.

5. PP 5.4 appears on the odd-numbered pages of the Archive reproduction. The document at Texas comprises sixteen loose pages printed on one side only. Instead of printing a sheet on both sides, two sheets were printed on one side only, folded and opened.

“Lotus Eaters” (5) [top]

CSE Level	Text 1986; 1922	Setting / Gathering	Active Months	Marked Copy	JJA
1	5.0001–0168 5.0169–0541 5.0542–0572	Pl 8.i Pl 9.i Pl 9bis.i	[June] – 23 June 17–28 June [June] – 28 June	Harvard Harvard Harvard	17.078–082 17.084–092 17.093
2	5.0001–0406; [068].01–079.12	PP 5.1	30 June – 2 August	Buffalo	22.239–248
3	5.0001–0292; [068].01–076.12	PP 5.2	8 August – [Aug]	Buffalo	22.257–264
4	5.0001–0179 (1) 5.0179–0406 (2) 5.0406–0572 (3)	Pl IX.i Pl X.i Pl XI.i	[Aug] – 2 September [Aug] – 2 September [Aug] – 2 September	Harvard Harvard Harvard	17.180–184 17.187–195 17.197–200
5	5.0001–0483; [068].01–081.14 (4) 5.0470–0572; 081.01–083.27 (5)	PP 5.3 PP 6.1	5–20 September [Sept] – 19 September	Texas Buffalo	22.268–280 22.315–317
6	5.0001–0470; [068].01–081.01 (6) 5.0470–0572; 081.01–083.27	PP 5.4 PP 6.2	[Sept] – 21 September 21–26 September	Texas Buffalo	22.287–311 22.331–333
7	5.0470–0572; 081.01–083.27	PP 6.3	27 Sept – 1 October	Buffalo	22.347–349
8	5.0470–0572; 081.01–083.27	PP 6.4	1–6 October	Texas	22.363–365

1. Placards IX–XI are paginated. See the introduction to the placards-finder.

2. The seventh and eighth pages of Placard X are blank. Joyce’s additions continue into this portion of the sheet.

3. Placard XI has only four pages. There are no blanks, however, as only a half sheet was pulled.

4. The page breaks of the following setting are marked by hand on PP 5.3.

5. To judge from the line numbers, it appears that PP 6.1 does not follow directly on from PP 5.3. However, the first page of PP 6.1 has had a fragment of paper, measuring 13.0 x 5.7 cm, physically attached onto it (JJA 22.315). The original first line of the setting was “Poisons the ouly [sic] cure” (U 5.483, 081.14) which does indeed follow directly from PP 5.3’s last line “Clogs the pores or the phlegm” (U 5.483, 081.14). The fragment of paper attached to the proof extends the material covered to include U 5.471–483, 081.01–14. These twelve lines of text, as they appear on the attached paper, are a resetting of the marked-up end of Placard XI, which include the corrections and additions indicated on that placard. There is also some additional (now illegible) pencil writing beneath this additional proof. On 15 September 1921, Darantiere sent Joyce this additional text to coordinate the text between Placard XI and Gathering 6.

6. The final word of text on the proof––“I”––is boxed off on PP 5.4 and written in hand on the first line of the next gathering, PP 6.2. With this change made, Gathering 5 ends at 080.37.

PP 5.4 appears on the odd-numbered pages of the Archive reproduction. The document at Texas comprises sixteen loose pages printed on one side only. Instead of printing a sheet on both sides, two sheets were printed on one side only, folded and opened.

“Hades” (6) [top]

CSE Level	Text 1986; 1922	Setting / Gathering	Active Months	Marked Copy	JJA
1	6.0001–0325 6.0326–0683 6.0684–1033	Pl 10.i Pl 11.i Pl 12.i	[Aug] – 2 September 10 Aug – 2 September 11 Aug – 2 September	Harvard Harvard Harvard	17.203–210 17.220–228 17.246–254
2	6.0001–0325 6.0326–0683 6.0684–1033	Pl 10.ii Pl 11.ii Pl 12.ii	15 September 6 Sept – [September] [September]	Harvard Harvard Harvard	17.211–218 17.229–236 17.255–262
3	6.0001–0325; [084].01–092.32 (1)	PP 6.1	[Sept] – 19 September	Buffalo	22.318–326
	6.0326–0683 6.0684–1033	Pl 11.iii Pl 12.iii	6–19 September [Sept] – 19 September	Harvard Harvard	17.237–244 17.263–270
4	6.0001–0485; [084].01–097.03 6.0486–1033; 097.04–111.21	PP 6.2 PP 7.1	21–26 September [Sept] – 26 September	Buffalo Buffalo	22.334–346 22.381–395
5	6.0001–0484; [084].01–097.01 6.0484–1033; 097.02–111.21	PP 6.3 PP 7.2	27 Sept – 1 October 26–30 September	Buffalo Buffalo	22.350–362 22.397–411
6	6.0001–0482; [084].01–096.37 6.0483–1033; 097.01–111.21	PP 6.4 PP 7.3	1–6 October [Oct] – 6 October	Texas Texas	22.366–378 22.413–427

1. The last four pages of PP 6.1 are blank. Also, this is the first CSE level to comprise both document types.

“Aeolus” (7) [top]

CSE Level	Text 1986; 1922	Setting / Gathering	Active Months	Marked Copy	JJA
1	7.0021–0372 7.0372–0702 7.0702–1041 7.1051–1075	Pl 13.i Pl 14.i Pl 15.i Pl 16.i	[August] 12 August – [August] [August] [August]	Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard	18.003–010 18.034–042 18.061–068 18.087
2	7.0001–0372 7.0372–0702 7.0702–1041 (1) 7.1042–1075	Pl 13.ii Pl 14.ii Pl 15.ii Pl 16.ii	23 August – [Sept] [August] – [September] [August] – [September] [Sept] – 19 September	Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard	18.012–020 18.043–050 18.069–076 18.095
3	7.0001–0282 (2) 7.0283–0372 7.0372–0702 7.0702–1041	Pl 13.iii Pl 13bis.i Pl 14.iii Pl 15.iii	12–19 September [Sept] – 19 September [Sept] – 19 September [Sept] – 19 September	Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard	18.021–028 18.029–032 18.051–058 18.077–084
4	7.0001–0025; [112].01–112.22 7.0026–0591; 113.01–129.23 7.0592–1075; 129.24–143.30	PP 7.1 PP 8.1 PP 9.1	[Sept] – 26 September [Sept] – 26 September [Sept] – 26 September	Buffalo Buffalo Buffalo	22.396 & 23.002 23.007–022 23.057–071
5	7.0001–0025; [112].01–112.22 7.0026–0581; 113.01–129.14 7.0582–1075; 129.15–143.30	PP 7.2 PP 8.2 PP 9.2	26–30 September 26–30 September 26–30 September	Buffalo Buffalo Buffalo	22.412 & 23.003 23.023–038 23.073–087
6	7.0001–0025; [112].01–112.22 7.0026–0567; 113.01–128.32 7.0567–1075; 129.01–143.30 7.0686; 132.16	PP 7.3 PP 8.3 PP 9.3 PP 9.3+ (3)	[Oct] – 6 October 3–6 October [Oct] – 11 October 11 October	Texas Texas Texas Texas	22. 428 & 23.004 23.039–054 23.089–103 23.363

1. The seventh and eighth pages of Pl 15.ii are set incorrectly. The Archive reproduces the two in the correct order (JJA 18.075–76).

2. The final page of Pl 13.iii is blank.

3. PP 9.3+ is a holograph letter from Joyce to Darantiere indicating a number of revisions and additions on Gatherings 9, 11 and 13. The physical document is bundled in with PP 13.4 in the Archive and so clicking on “Marked Copy” links to PP 13.4+ in the page proof-finder. Joyce’s letter reads:

Changements à faire si les pages indiquées

ne sont pas déjà tirées.

p. 196, l 2 au lieu de “stated” imprimez “capped”

p 162, l 10 après la parole “foodlift” ajoutez avant

le point “across his stained square of

newspaper.”

p. 13^<1>2^, l 26 au lieu de “Gray” mettez “Grey” (JJA 23.363)

The letter is dated “11.X.21” (by the printer, one assumes) and its third instruction refers to PP 9.3 (the first and second changement are for PP 13.4––“Scylla and Charybdis”–– and PP 11.4––“Lestrygonians”––respectively).

Several weeks earlier, in late August, Joyce had made an addition on Pl 14.ii for the printer: “Gregor Gray made the design for it” (JJA 18.50). The October letter corrects “Gray” to “Grey,” the surname of an artist listed in Thom’s 1904––Don Gifford with Robert J. Seidman “Ulysses” Annotated: Notes for James Joyce’s “Ulysses.” 2nd ed., rev. and enl. (Berkeley: University of California Press, 1988), p. 142––a change described as an authorial correction or revision at ‘a6’ of ‘a2’ in Gabler notation. PP 9.3 had already been marked Bon à tirer, returned and reset by 7 October. Rather than pull the gathering again and send it out to Joyce, the correction was made on this same document by a printer (JJA 23.092). Joyce obviously did not have PP 9.3 to hand when he wrote the note––the whole grounds of his writing to Darantiere––but he spotted the flaw while looking at PP 9.1. “Gray” appears on page 131, line 26 of the first setting of Gathering 9 (JJA 23.059). Perhaps it was then that he recalled the second setting because the change in page number from 131 to 132 matches with the appearance of “Gray” on PP 9.2 (though there it is on line 2 of page 132: JJA 23.076). One would imagine PP 9.2 was readily available when Joyce was writing the note––either the marked copy, assuming the ‘used up’ marked proofs were being returned to him, or a duplicate. Perhaps this second setting was simply overlooked.

“Lestrygonians” (8) [top]

CSE Level	Text 1986; 1922	Setting / Gathering	Active Months	Marked Copy	JJA
1	8.0001–0279 8.0280–0649 8.0650–1006 8.1007–1193 (1)	Pl 16.i Pl 17.i Pl 18.i Pl 19.i	[August] [August] [August] 17 August – [August]	Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard	18.088–094 18.105–112 18.123–130 18.140–145
2	8.0001–0279 8.0280–0649 8.0650–1006 8.1007–1193	Pl 16.ii Pl 17.ii Pl 18.ii Pl 19.ii	[Sept] – 19 September [Sept] – 19 September [Sept] – 19 September [Sept] – 19 September	Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard	18.096–102 18.113–120 18.131–138 18.149–153
3	8.0001–0026; [144].01–144.25 8.0027–0653; 144.26–161.13 8.0654–1193; 161.14–175.21	PP 9.1 PP 10.1 PP 11.1	[Sept] – 26 September 22–26 September [Sept] – 26 September	Buffalo Buffalo Buffalo	23.072 23.107–122 23.161–174
4	8.0001–0026; [144].01–144.25 8.0027–0650; 144.26–161.10 8.0651–1193; 161.11–175.21	PP 9.2 PP 10.2 PP 11.2	26–30 September 27–30 September 26 Sept – [October?]	Buffalo Buffalo Buffalo	23. 088 23.123–138 23.177–190
5	8.0001–0028; [144].01–144.26 8.0028–0639; 145.01–160.37 8.0640–1193; 161.01–175.21	PP 9.3 PP 10.3 PP 11.3	[Oct] – 11 October 3 October – [Oct] [October]	Texas Texas Buffalo	23.104 23.139–140, 145–158 (2) 23.193–207
6	8.0079–0081; 146.16–146.17 8.0064–0102; 146.01–147.01 8.0640–1193; 161.01–175.21	PP 10.3+ (3) PP 10.4 (4) PP 11.4	3–10 October [October] 7 October – [Oct]	Texas Texas Yale	23.141 23.142 23.209–223
7	8.0064–0101; 146.01–146.36 8.0690–0691; 162.11 8.0640–1193; 161.01–175.21	PP 10.5 (5) PP 11.4+ (6) PP 11.5	[Oct] – 10 October 11 October 12–14 October	Texas Texas Texas	23.143–144 23.363 23.225–239

1. The fifth page of the placard has “19bis” written on the top of it (JJA 18.145). No such document was pulled.

2. The pagination differs to that given in the Archive due to the restatement of several pages as PP 10.3+, PP 10.4 and PP 10.5.

3. PP 10.3+ is a holograph letter from Joyce to Darantiere indicating an addition on Gathering 10. PP 10.3 was marked Bon à tirer, signed by Joyce and countersigned by Beach. Before the material was set Joyce sent a letter to the printers––sometime between 3–10 October (probably between 7–10 October). The letter reads:

La page 34 bis manqué

Inserez selon dépêche

p. 146

l. 16

apres “seagoose.” et avant “Wonder”

Swans from Anna Liffey ^<come> swim^ down here

sometimes to preen themselves. No accounting

for tastes. (JJA 23.141)

The letter arrived in time and Darantiere wrote “Attention! Montrer cette correction à Mr [d’Avout] avant de rouler” on the relevant page of PP 10.3 (JJA 23.140). The single page, with its PP 10.3 additions, was set and pulled and “SA”––Bernard d’Avout, perhaps?––copied Joyce’s addition onto it (JJA 23.142).

4. PP 10.4 is a single page of proof and constitutes a resetting of the text of PP 10.3. The document is not recorded in the JJA. It is recorded by Gabler as “Lestrygonians” level 6 (see Ulysses: A Critical and Synoptic Edition 320.22–24 for the swan addition made to it). The single page was again pulled, incorporating the addition in “SA’s” hand and dated. This is PP 10.5 (pace the Archive) and Gabler level 7. Cf. Gathering 19.5 for “Cyclops” (JJA 25.97–116) and Gathering 30.2.b for “Circe” (JJA 26.171–186).

5. This single page setting does not contain an Imprimerie but, as a reset of PP 10.4, must be PP 10.5. The Archive, perhaps following Texas’ material arrangement, places it with PP 10.3. Cf. Gabler’s treatment of PP 19.6 and PP 35.3.

6. PP 11.4+ is a holograph letter from Joyce to Darantiere indicating a number of revisions and additions on Gatherings 9, 11 and 13. The physical document is bundled in with PP 13.4 in the Archive and so clicking on “Marked Copy” links to PP 13.4+ in the page proof-finder. Joyce’s letter reads:

Changements à faire si les pages indiquées

ne sont pas déjà tirées.

p. 196, l 2 au lieu de “stated” imprimez “capped”

p 162, l 10 après la parole “foodlift” ajoutez avant

le point “across his stained square of

newspaper.”

p. 13^<1>2^, l 26 au lieu de “Gray” mettez “Grey” (JJA 23.363)

The letter is dated “11.X.21” (by the printer, one assumes) and its second instruction refers to PP 11.4 (the first and third changement are for PP 13.4––“Scylla and Charybdis”–– and PP 9.3––“Aeolus”––respectively).

Joyce and Beach had signed off on PP 11.4 between 7–11 October. A further setting was made, PP 11.5, to which Hirchwald added in Joyce’s addition by hand (JJA 23.226). The Imprimerie date is 12 October and the pull was sent to Joyce and Beach for a second Bon à tirer. The final printer’s date on the document is 14 October.

“Scylla and Charybdis” (9) [top]

CSE Level	Text 1986; 1922	Setting / Gathering	Active Months	Marked Copy	JJA
1	9.0001–0099 9.0100–0405 9.0406–0713 9.0714–1022 9.1022–1225 (1)	Pl 19.i Pl 20.i Pl 21.i Pl 22.i Pl 23.i	17 August [Aug] – 5 September 19 August – 5 Sept [Aug] – 5 September [Aug] – 5 September	Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard	18.146–148 18.159–166 18.176–184 18.195–202 18.213–220
2	9.0001–0099 9.0100–0405 9.0406–0713 9.0714–1022 9.1022–1225 (2)	Pl 19.ii Pl 20.ii Pl 21.ii Pl 22.ii Pl 23.ii	[Sept] – 19 September [September] [September] [September] [September]	Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard	18.154–156 18.167–174 18.185–192 18.203–210 18.221–228
3	9.0001–0064; [176].01–178.05 9.0065–0662; 178.06–194.08 9.0663–1225; 194.09–209.32	PP 11.1 PP 12.1 (3) PP 13.1	[Sept] – 26 September [Sept] – 26 September [Sept] – 26 September	Buffalo Not available (4) Buffalo	23.175–176 23.259–274 23.311–326
4	9.0001–0064; [176].01–178.05 9.0065–0662; 178.06–194.08 9.0663–1225;194.09–209.32	PP 11.2 PP 12.2 (5) PP 13.2	26 Sept – [October?] 26 Sept – [October?] 26 Sept – [October?]	Buffalo Buffalo Buffalo	23.191–192 23.243–258 23.327–342
5	9.0001–0026; [176].01–[176].25 9.0027–0616; 177.01–192.37 9.0616–1192; 193.01–208.34 9.1193–1225; 209.01–209.32	PP 11.3 PP 12.3 (6) PP 13.3 PP 14.3	[October] [October] 4 October – [Oct] [October]	Buffalo Buffalo Buffalo Buffalo	23.208 23.275–290 23.343–358 23.379 & 24.035
6	9.0001–0026; [176].01–[176].25 9.0027–0616; 177.01–192.37 9.0439–0440; 188.10–188.11 9.0726; 196.02 9.0616–1192; 193.01–208.34 9.1193–1225; 209.01–209.32	PP 11.4 PP 12.4 (7) PP 12.4+ (8) PP 13.4+ (9) PP 13.4 PP 14.4	7 Oct – [October] [Oct] – 12 October 14 October 11 October [Oct] – 12 October [Oct] – 13 October	Yale Texas Texas Texas Texas Texas	23.224 23.291–302, 305–308 23.303 23.363 23.359–362, 365–376 (10) 23.380 & 24.051
7	9.0001–0026; [176].01–[176].25	PP 11.5	12–14 October	Texas	23.240

1. The last two pages of Pl 23.i are blank. The printers may have run out of typescript to set at this stage. Darantiere informed Beach on 12 August 1921 that the typesetters were nearing the end of the portion of typescript then in their possession. Buffalo XIV.22: Darantiere to Beach; 12 August 1921. T. l. s.: 1l.

2. The last two pages of Pl 23.ii are blank.

3. Groden Index, p. 163 corrects the order of the settings of PP 12 in volume 23. For PP 12.1, JJA 23.259–274, the Archive reproduces the unmarked Buffalo V.C.2, claiming, “Joyce’s corrected copy is not extant” (though see next note). Another duplicate is unreproduced.

4. Since Groden Index the marked copy of PP 12.1 has surfaced. It originally disappeared after Sylvia Beach gave it to Irwin Swerdlow in 1945. She inscribed the document: “Proofs of ‘Ulysses,’ 1921, with corrections in Joyce’s handwriting | for Erwin [sic] Swerdlow from Sylvia Beach––Paris 1945.” Swerdlow, drafted into the United States Army, participated in the liberation of Paris in 1944. After earning a Ph.D. from Harvard he taught English at Dillard and Dartmouth colleges. PP 12.1 is item 43 in Glenn Horowitz, James Joyce: Books & Manuscripts (New York: Glenn Horowitz Bookseller, 1996), pp. 38–39, 100. The current location of the proof is not known.

5. Groden Index, p. 163 corrects the order of the settings of PP 12 in volume 23. PP 12.2, JJA 23.243–258, has two unreproduced duplicates: Buffalo V.C.1––12b; V.C.2.

6. Groden Index, p. 163 corrects the order of the settings of PP 12 in volume 23. PP 12.3 is JJA 23.275–290.

7. Groden Index, p. 163 corrects the order of the settings of PP 12 in volume 23. PP 12.4 is JJA 23.291–302, 305–308.

8. PP 12.4+ is a holograph letter from Joyce to Darantiere indicating an addition on Gathering 12. PP 12.4 was marked Bon à tirer, signed by Joyce and countersigned by Beach, and sent back to Darantiere (dated 12 October). A day or two after sending the proof Joyce sent a letter:

Ajoutez si encore possible

p 188, l 11 après “commentator,” et avant “His”

de la ligne suivante imprimez “Mr

George Bernard Shaw. Nor should we

forget Mr Frank Harris.”

pour évites des enems les nomes sont

GEORGE BERNARD SHAW

FRANK HARRIS (JJA 23.303)

The letter is dated 14.X.21 (by the printer, one assumes). It evidently arrived in time because Hirchwald copied the correction onto the Bon à tirer-ed proof PP 12.4 (JJA 23.302). Since the page and line number Joyce gives in his note are correct one assumes he was looking at an unmarked duplicate of PP 12.4. Rather than mark up a second pull of the same setting (as he did on several other occasions) he sent in the note containing his single addition. The text of that addition, however, is problematic. He instructs the printer to insert the name “Frank Harris” along with that of Shaw––yet “Mr Frank Harris” has been in the text of “Scylla and Charybdis” since at least the first setting in proof, Pl 21.i (JJA 18.177). The page and line numbers make clear that Joyce was using a PP 12.4 duplicate (the three earlier settings of Gathering 12 have Harris on either p. 187 or l. 10 of p. 188)––it seems, however, that either he misread the document or he is taking particular pains that the names are spelt correctly.

9. PP 13.4+ is a holograph letter from Joyce to Darantiere indicating a number of revisions and additions on Gatherings 9, 11 and 13. PP 13.4 was marked Bon à tirer, signed by Joyce and countersigned by Beach. While the material was in transit (PP 13.4 is dated 12 October) Joyce sent a letter to the printers a day or two before 11 October. Letter reads:

Changements à faire si les pages indiquées

ne sont pas déjà tirées.

p. 196, l 2 au lieu de “stated” imprimez “capped”

p 162, l 10 après la parole “foodlift” ajoutez avant

le point “across his stained square of

newspaper.”

p. 13^<1>2^, l 26 au lieu de “Gray” mettez “Grey” (JJA 23.363)

The letter is dated “11.X.21” (by the printer, one assumes) and its first instruction refers to PP 13.4 (the second and third changement are for PP 11.4––“Lestrygonians”–– and PP 9.3––“Aeolus”––respectively).

The marked-up PP 13.4 was received by the printers by 12 October. The change of “stated” to “capped” in “Buck Mulligan stated” was made on this proof by one of the printers.

10. The paginations differ to those given in the Archive due to the restatement of pages as PP 12.4+ and PP 13.4+.

“Wandering Rocks” (10) [top]

CSE Level	Text 1986; 1922	Setting / Gathering	Active Months	Marked Copy	JJA
1	10.0001–0301 10.0302–0607 10.0608–0936 10.0937–1257	Pl 24.i Pl 25.i Pl 26.i Pl 27.i	25 August – 5 Sept [Aug] – 5 September 27 August – 5 Sept [Aug] – 5 September	Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard	18.230–238 18.249–256 18.266–274 18.285–292
2	10.0001–0301 10.0302–0607 10.0608–0936 10.0937–1257	Pl 24.ii Pl 25.ii Pl 26.ii Pl 27.ii	7 September – [Sept] [September] [September] [September]	Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard	18.239–246 18.257–264 18.275–282 18.293–300
3	10.0001–0598; 210.01–226.14 (1) 10.0601–1198; 226.17–242.25	PP 14.1 PP 15.1	[Sept] – 26 September [Sept] – 26 September	Buffalo Buffalo	24.003–018 24.069–084
	10.1198–1282	Pl 28.i	28 September – [Sept?]	Harvard	18.303–305
4	10.0001–0598; 210.01–226.14 10.0601–1198; 226.17–242.25	PP14.2 PP 15.2	28 September – [Oct?] [September?] – [Oct?]	Buffalo Buffalo	24.019–034 24.085–100
	10.1198–1282	Pl 28.ii	4 October – [Oct]	Harvard	18.306–308
5	10.0001–0544; [210].01–225.01 10.0545–1135; 225.02–241.03 10.1135–1282; 241.03–244.34	PP 14.3 PP 15.3 PP 16.1	[October] [October] 8 October – [Oct]	Buffalo Buffalo Buffalo	24.036–050 24.101–116 24.135–138
6	10.0001–0543; [210].01–224.37 10.0544–1135; 225.01–241.03 10.1135–1282; 241.03–244.34	PP 14.4 PP 15.4 PP 16.2	[Oct] – 13 October [Oct] – 13 October 12 October – [Oct]	Texas Texas Buffalo	24.052–066 24.117–132 24.151–154
7	10.1132–1282; 241.01–244.34	PP 16.3	17–24 October	Texas	24.167–170

1. CSE levels 3 and 4 comprise both document types.

“Sirens” (11) [top]

CSE Level	Text 1986; 1922	Setting / Gathering	Active Months	Marked Copy	JJA
1	11.0001–0180 11.0181–0487 11.0487–0801 11.0802–1111 11.0802–1111 11.1112–1294	Pl 28.i Pl 29.i Pl 30.i Pl 31.i.a Pl 31.i.b Pl 32.i	28 September – [Oct?] 28 September – [Oct?] [September] – [Oct?] [September] – [Oct?] 29 September – [Oct?] 30 September – [Oct?]	Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard Princeton Harvard	19.006–010 19.021–028 19.039–046 19.057–064 19.065–072 19.085–089
2	11.0001–0180 11.0181–0487 11.0487–0801 11.0802–1111 11.1112–1294	Pl 28.ii Pl 29.ii Pl 30.ii Pl 31.ii Pl 32.ii	4 October – [Oct] [October] [October] 6 October – [Oct] [October]	Harvard Harvard Harvard Princeton Harvard	19.014–018 19.029–036 19.047–054 19.075–082 19.093–097
3	11.0001–0447; [245].01–256.37 11.0448–1058; 257.01–273.05 11.1058–1294; 273.06–279.10	PP 16.1 PP 17.1 PP 18.1	8 October – [Oct] [October] 10–14 October	Buffalo Buffalo & Rosenbach (1) Buffalo	24.139–150 24.185–200 & N/A 24.235–241
4	11.0001–0447; [245].01–256.37 11.0448–1057; 257.01–273.04 11.1053–1294; 273.01–279.10	PP 16.2 PP 17.2 PP 18.2	12 October – [Oct] [Oct] – 19 October 17–19 October	Buffalo Buffalo Buffalo	24.155–166 24.201–216 24.251–257
5	11.0001–0447; [245].01–256.37 11.0448–1053; 257.01–272.37 11.1053–1294; 273.01–279.10	PP 16.3 PP 17.3 PP 18.3	17–24 October [Oct] – 24 October 25–27 October	Texas Texas Texas	24.171–182 24.217–232 24.267–273

1. Gathering 17.1 is divided between Buffalo and the Rosenbach Foundation. Pp. 257–260 and 269–272 are at Buffalo. Pp. 261–268 are at the Rosenbach Foundation. The Archive reproduces the unmarked pages of a duplicate in place of the Rosenbach portion (JJA 24.189–196). Page 266 of the marked proof (now the text of U 11.0791–0829) contains, as well as Joyce’s additions, a dedication written by Beach “a page proof […] for Sylvia with love from her aunt Sylvia” and an appended screed with Joyce’s signature. The page is reproduced in Michael Barsanti, “Ulysses” in Hand: The Rosenbach Manuscript (Philadelphia: Rosenbach Museum & Library, 2000), p. 41.

The first setting of “Cyclops” Placard 37 contains the draft text of some material for this setting of Gathering 17. In the upper border of the third page of the placard, Joyce’s draft of two elements appears (JJA 19.205). The second of these has not been identified, but the first is Joyce’s sketch for “Siopold” (now U 11.0751).

Lionel

Leopold

Simon <Richsiopold> Siopold

Richie

The second exclamation was added to “Sirens” on PP 17.1––at the same time Joyce was working on the placards of “Cyclops” (i.e. early October 1921). The relevant page of the “Sirens” proof is not reproduced in the Archive as it forms part of the Rosenbach Foundation’s holdings. See JJA 24.192–193 for the surrogate reproduction.

“Cyclops” (12) [top]

CSE Level	Text 1986; 1922	Setting / Gathering	Active Months	Marked Copy	JJA
1	12.0001–0117 12.0118–0442 12.0443–0848 12.0848–1183 12.1184–1562 12.1562–1918 (1)	Pl 32.i Pl 33.i Pl 34.i Pl 35.i Pl 36.i Pl 37.i	30 September – [Oct] [September?] – [Oct] 1 October – [Oct] 3 October – [Oct] 4 October – [Oct] 5 October – [Oct]	Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard	19.090–092 19.103–110 19.121–128 19.149–156 19.167–174 19.203–210
2	12.0001–0117 12.0118–0442 12.0443–0808 12.0808–0848 12.0848–1183 12.1184–1562 (2) 12.1562–1918	Pl 32.ii Pl 33.ii Pl 34.ii Pl 34bis.i Pl 35.ii Pl 36.ii Pl 37.ii	[October] [October] 5 October – [Oct] [October] 6 October – [Oct] 8 October – [Oct] [October]	Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard	19.098–100 19.111–118 19.129–136 19.145 19.157–164 19.175–182 19.211–218
3	12.0443–0808 12.0808–0848 12.1184–1518 12.1518–1562 12.1562–1918	Pl 34.iii Pl 34bis.ii Pl 36.iii Pl 36bis.i Pl 37.iii	6 October – [Oct] 7 October – [Oct] 8–17 October [Oct] – 17 October [Oct] – 17 October	Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard Harvard	19.137–144 19.146 19.183–190 19.199 19.219–226
4	12.0001–0359; [280].01–289.20 12.0359–1011; 289.21–306.27	PP 18.1 PP 19.1	10–14 October 12 October – [Oct]	Buffalo Buffalo	24.242–250 & 25.002–010 25.033–048
	12.1184–1518 12.1518–1561 12.1562–1918	Pl 36.iv Pl 36bis.ii Pl 37.iv	18 October – [Oct?] [October] – [Nov?] 18 Oct – 3 November	Harvard Harvard Harvard	19.191–198 19.200 19.227–234
5	12.0001–0358; [280].01–289.20 12.0358–1004; 289.20–306.20	PP 18.2 PP 19.2	17–19 October [Oct] – 19 October	Buffalo Buffalo	24.258–266 & 25.012–020 25.049–064
6	12.0358–0977; 289.20–305.32	PP 19.3	19 October	Buffalo	25.065–080
7	12.0001–0343; [280].01–289.05 12.0343–0957; 289.06–305.13 12.0958–1570; 305.14–321.20	PP 18.3 PP 19.4 PP 20.1 (4)	25 October 26 October [November]	Texas Not extant (3) Princeton	24.274–282 25.022–030 25.081–096 25.135–150
8	[various] [various] 12.0338–0950; 289.01–305.06 12.0566; 295.01 12.0951–1561; 305.07–321.12 12.1562–1918; 321.13–330.25	PP 19.5+ (5) PP 20.2+ PP 19.5 PP 19.5++ (6) PP 20.2 (7) PP 21.1	10 November – [Nov] 10 November – [Nov] 7–14 November [Nov] – 15 November [Nov] – 14 November [Nov] – 17 November	Texas Texas Texas Texas Texas Texas	25.162 25.163 25.097–102, 105–114 25.103 25.151–161, 164–168 (8) 25.171–180
9	12.0907–0944; 304.01–304.37 12.0945–1549; 305.01–320.37	PP 19.6 (9) PP 20.3 (10)	[November] [November]	Texas Princeton	25.115 25.119–134

1. Pl 37.i includes drafts of two addition for “Sirens” (JJA 19.205). The second of these, “Siopold” (now U 11.0751), was added onto PP 17.1. See the note to “Sirens” Gathering 17 above.

2. The fifth page of the placard has “Pla. 36 bis” written on the top of it (JJA 19.179).

3. It is not known if there was a marked set of this setting of Gathering 19 because no revisions or additions were made at this level.

4. Groden Index, p. 164 corrects the order of the settings of PP 20 in volume 25. No corrections or revisions were made at this level.

5. On 10 November Hirchwald sent a two-page holograph letter to Joyce. He wrote requesting confirmation on a number of points in PP 19.5 (his first page) and PP 20.2 (his second page). The first page of the letter––PP 19.5+––reads (with Joyce’s responses in bold):